Developmental Editing plus Proofreading

Developmental/structural editing includes in-margin comments to improve:

• Structure and organization of your book

• Description elements

• Pacing and Flow of the work

• Writing Suggestions and Tips

• My reactions, as a reader, regarding your book

• My reactions, as an editor, regarding your book

• Any inconsistencies in your book/story

• Any missing information your reader may need

• Recommendations on when rephrasing may be necessary

• Notes on any other issues I see

My editing and proofreading packages include:

• Grammar, punctuation, and spelling correction

• Improved sentence structure

• Syntax correction

• Vocabulary recommendations

• Better flow and clarity in your writing